A Halloween Murder ... by Anjubee

These are my 2 entries for the Halloween Showcase.

I built an abandoned warehouse and wrote up a story to go along with it. I tried to write it in a comic book/graphic novel kind of way. I don't do scary/gruesome too well, so the story ended up too "cute." But I hope I managed to capture some Halloween flavor.

Big thanks to jisgr8, Amoebius, CaliforniaBound, Mmyoko, and RalphaelNinja for letting me use their avatars in my little story.

Anyway, here ya go!

Link to Asset: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=1434695

Link to Story: http://www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=118024

Great story

You've done this very well.
I love the lighting and all the small details.

/T

I thought it was awesome xD

It was a bit cute at the end but I don't think it detracted from it in any way

I have to say, slide 9 is far and away my favourite

i love it! And the story, rec'd

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This should replace the default warehouse in the game. rec'd

The story too is great... with special participation of Amoebius as the agent

, and he's kinda slim here

Haha, especially love the story! A bit disappointed I didn't suffer a terrible Final Destination style halloween death, though. Both the creations were awesome, Anju! I'll be careful from now on whilst delivering papers. d-:

- Mmyoko out.

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SuperP: Hehe! I only changed his clothing! Didn't adjust the slimness of his sim at all. Thanks for the rec.

randommermade: Thank ya!

Tamlyn: I actually added in that scene because I wanted to showcase that area more, but yeah.. it did make it more cutesy than intended. Thank ya! I love slide 9 too. Considering using it as a future avatar picture.

Tota: Thanks for noticing the lighting! I spent a bit fudging with that.

Edit: Mmookie: heehee!! I guess I could have made you the dead one, but you're just avatar is just too precious to kill off.

I love your lot and story, Anjubee! Rec'd them both. The music you chose for the story is perfect and I liked the ending- the tone was just right to me. Great job!

I gave both a rec! It was a very cute story (I know I said cute and it was a murder story but I was very entertained

). BTW .. .Nice tights!

LOL! That was AWESOME, Anju!! I loved that story! Your warehouse came out so well, too...What a great entry!

Every Neighborhood needs a creepy looking lot to start mischief on. Well done, Anju.

That was great Anju! The warehouse is perfect. Your story is so great. It was fun to see J in that Batman suit lol! And your avi looks so pretty. Great use of avis all around.

A rec. for both!

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Hey how did you know what I was wearing for Halloween? Hilarious how Bat J wiped the floor with CB with his superior ninja skills

. Great work with the lot and story. Both rec'd

J

Loved it Anjubee, I want to see more

Netherlia: Thanks! I actually had more scenes planned where we find out the motive, but I didn't want to story to get too convoluted. So glad you liked it!

J: Once I saw that costume, you know I just had to do it.

Evie: Hehe, yay! It was easier to use people's avatars rather than creating all the characters from scratch. Ralph actually played 2 roles!

PP: Thank ya! I definitely started a lot of mischief in this.

Bree: LOL! I was hoping people would get a kick out of it.

Terentia: Haha, thanks! Yeah, it turned out to be cute when I was aiming for suspense. Go fig! Glad you enjoyed the story... and the tights!

Tfbob: Thanks! I thought the music was quite fitting too.