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This is also being hosted at Simpure Thoughts. ^_^





Lainie's .sim file is available for download here. Don't worry if CC doesn't transfer, as you'll most likely be styling her to your liking anyways.







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-Mark with Kayla Brown
-Izzy with Becky Clark
-Nigal with Florence Avery
-Dr. Lincoln with Darley Grimm







-Sean with Brooke Marshall
-Gloria with Paris London
-Scruffy with Amanda (Mandy) James
-Lissa with Siofra Forrest
-Gim with Aiko
-Liv with Breanna Reath

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Izzy with Becky:

It was a hot summer day,and Lainie and Becky had decided to go swimming.They had agreed to meet at 4 pm at the local pool.When Becky arrived,Lainie was already waiting for her.She ran towards her friend...and tripped on a toy pirate boat.One of the kids must have left it lying around...


Dr. Lincoln with Darley:

"Enter the Lopper"

Cold, hunger, apathy-the all too common companions of Bad Creek Falls' homeless population. Soup kitchens and shelters help reduce their sting, guaranteeing a hot meal to warm the belly and cot to cradle it. And now a new companion stalks these 'least of God's people', removing the only thing of value they can yet lay claim to: their heads. Tagged 'The Lopper' by the local paper, he's become a 'bogeyman' of sorts among those in the homeless community, a menace the local law enforcement has yet to contain.

When Darley's and Lainie's friend Hobo Bob 'headlines' as the latest victim, they decide enough is enough. Lainie uses her skills to act as bait by dressing up as one of the homeless, while Darley stalks as back-up, waiting for the chance to exact justice for poor Bob.

It isn't long before they face their foe in one of the many abandoned industrial sites inhabited by the homeless. Lainie plays the perfect victim, keeping the fiend's attention squarely on her. Darley pops out from behind a refuse container and puts her heel to the back of the monster's skull with a surprise flying kick. Only then do they learn the horrible truth: the policeman sent to investigate the killings was, in fact, the barely human-looking fiend that is 'The Lopper'!


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Mark with Kayla:


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Kayla, Lainie and Peter decided to drive out to the beach on Friday night after they had all done with work. Kayla packed a picnic basket and she and Lainie had some girl-talk while Peter caught some waves. Before they drove home they took a moment to watch the gorgeous sunset.

Nigal with Florence:



~*Florence's P.O.V*~

It's a lovely mid-Summer's day. So far, me and Lainie had done absolutely everything our minds imagination could think of to do, involving fun.
Although, I do have a job at TopShop at our local mall, and Lainie usually came to visit me after my short morning shifts every Saturday. Whilst I was waiting outside the shop, the idea hit me... I stared at the grey male figure standing on the incomplete display, which I was supposed to finish. Soon Lainie arrived and I told her all about my idea.
Her recent surgery on also came to our advantage; (Because of our fall almost a year ago, she needed a surgery to repair part of her skull) and she was bald. We ran through the mall to the costume's store, and bought some grey face paint, a lot of it. We went into TopShop and told one of my co-workers of my idea. She didn't love it at first... But then adjusted with it. We bought some clothes and slipped them on in the toilets; and set ourselves up.

Lainie took the first strike, a little girl came up to observe the display.
Suddenly;
"RAWR!" Lainie exclaimed, placing her hands against the glass with a slam.
The little innocent girl jumped back, letting out a squeal before running off to her mother.
I have to admit, that day was fun until the mall cops took us out~

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1st Place: Mark with Kayla (145)


Drew:

Model’s Appearance: 10/10
Model’s Pose: 8/10
Background: 10/10
Creativity: 15/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 48/50
Comments: This is a beautiful photo, Mark. I love the idea and although the setting is fairly simple, I absolutely love it. You incorporated the pose wonderfully, too. My only issue with this photo is that I’m not a fan of how “stiff” everyone looks with their poses. And maybe it’s just the angle, but it doesn’t really look like Lainie is leaning on the railing. x] This was a gorgeous photo, though, Mark – way to go out with a bang! ^_^

Phebes:

Model’s Appearance: 9/10
Model’s Pose: 10/10
Background: 10/10
Creativity: 15/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 49/50

Gorgeous Mark. I cannot even tell which pose is the one that is supposed to be a couples pose! The coloring of this photo is heavenly and dreamy. I love the setting and the props you used. My only deduction is because Peter is central of the picture and making eye contact he looks like he is the actual model of the competition. You did so good with this assignment. Great job!!

Dylan:

Model’s Appearance: 10/10
Model’s Pose: 9/10
Background: 9/10
Creativity: 15/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 48/50

Ungf, that sunset, so beautiful! I was really impressed Mark, this picture was just all kinds of awesomeness, and gasp!, is th-th-that Kayla’s f-face? I mean, where do we begin? For starters, I wasn’t too fond of Lainie’s pose. It doesn’t really look like her foots matching up with the fence, so it kind of looks like she’s floating. And I’m not too sure if your description matched the picture, It’s mentioned that they’re all watching the sunset, yet they all seem to be looking in different directions. And a minor quibble, I’m not to fond of those lines along the horizon. I mean, I know they’re not your fault, but I do think you could have been able to fix them right up. And… that’s about it. Great job, and can’t wait to see final standings, because I totally lost track of scores! Nice pic, Mark.

TIE: 2nd Place: Izzy with Becky (144)


Drew:

Model’s Appearance: 10/10
Model’s Pose: 10/10
Background: 9/10
Creativity: 13/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 47/50
Comments: Wow, Izzy! You’ve come such a long way – this photo is fantastic! Although the idea isn’t the most creative, since the pose has always seemed like a tripping/falling pose to me, this is a great entry! The attention you paid to all of the extras is amazing! I deducted a point from the background, though, because I feel that the space behind Lainie and Becky is a little too empty – maybe a towel rack or something would’ve helped fill up the space. But overall, Izzy, you did a phenomenal job!

Phebes:

Model’s Appearance: 10/10
Model’s Pose: 10/10
Background: 10/10
Creativity: 15/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 50/50

Wow! Izzy I am so impressed with how far you came through this cycle. This picture was amazeballs! You incorporated (<--see what I did there) the crazy pose perfectly and created a full of life picture and story. Your lighting is spot on and I don't see any major quality issues. You should really be so proud of yourself. Congrats and I hope to see more of you around in the modeling community.

Dylan:

Model’s Appearance: 9/10
Model’s Pose: 10/10
Background: 9/10
Creativity: 14/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 47/50

Gasp, you did not do this photo, Izzy! This is SUCH a major improvement, I’m so shocked, it’s very nice! Not too many problems with this picture, and I love how the extras in the back are posed accordingly. I do wish the inside was a bit more clutter, although. One question though, if she tripped over the boat, wouldn’t it be behind her, as she’s already in the air? I’m not too sure if my logic holds up, so I didn’t dock any points, I was just wondering. I do find your model’s eyes to be a bit weird in the pic, although I’m not sure if that’s because of the lighting. Last thing, creativity. I though the story was very cute and creative, although in that pose pack, I expected that one of them could be used for falling down, However, I still like how you used it in the assignment, so job well done Izzy. I think you have improved so much throughout the course, Izzy, you should really be proud of yourself. Hopefully I’ll still see you competing after this ends!

TIE: 2nd Place: Dr. Lincoln with Darley (144)


Drew:

Model’s Appearance: 10/10
Model’s Pose: 10/10
Background: 10/10
Creativity: 15/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 50/50
Comments: Glad to see you finished strong, Dr. Lincoln! This photo is simply spectacular! I must admit that I really like the angle, too! ^_^ Not much else to say – it was a flawless, captivating photo. Perfect job!

Phebes:

Model’s Appearance: 10/10
Model’s Pose: 10/10
Background: 8/10
Creativity: 15/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 48/50


Dr. Lincoln it has been an honor getting to judge your photos and bask in the glory that they are. This week is on par with past weeks living up to the picture before. I really love Darley and her take action pose and attitude. She is luck to have an accomplice/friend in Lainie to go along with her schemes. The Lopper is creeptastic!! My only complaint is the rugs. They blend in just a bit to much way in the back and then up front it looks like it could just be ground flooring. I would have liked to see one more stand out in an odd way and be used off the wall bizarre then somewhat masked. I do love the angle of the picture but that might be part of the reason especially in the back that the rug is hidden too. Overall I loved the picture!! Great job!

Dylan:

Model’s Appearance: 10/10
Model’s Pose: 10/10
Background: 9/10
Creativity: 13/15
Relation to CC: 4/5
Total: 46/50

I must say, I just love how he isn’t expecting Darley’s kick to the face! It’s sad to see this story come to an end (in the competition, at least), but it’s a great ending, nonetheless! A couple of things: I feel like the rugs weren’t utilized enough. Granted, they’re rugs and hard to focus on, but I feel like they’re almost nonexistent in the picture, they’re hard to see. I think you would have benefited if you chose a much more out-there piece of CC for the assignment. While I do wish I could give more points for the oh so cute Emily Genghis, I do think that the rugs were the downfall of the picture. Granted, they didn’t ruin the picture, or make it bad or anything, I just think they made it hard to be noticeable in the pic. Either way, this was a really great assignment, and I hope I’ll be able to judge (or compete) with you again sometime in the future!

3rd Place: Nigal with Florence (141)


Drew:

Model’s Appearance: 10/10
Model’s Pose: 9/10
Background: 10/10
Creativity: 15/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 49/50
Comments: That poor little girl! XD This was a fantastic way to end the competition, Nigal – I really love this entry! <3 The set is incredibly detailed, and I love the use of all the extras! The only reason I deducted a point from Pose is because Florence and Lainie aren’t the first things that my eyes are drawn to. That was such a minor detail, though. Overall, fantastic job!

Phebes:

Model’s Appearance: 8/10
Model’s Pose: 10/10
Background: 8/10
Creativity: 15/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 46/50

Hahaha Lainie is hilarious. This totally looks like a shopping center which is both good and bad for me. There is so much going on that it is fantastic but Florence is getting lost in the crowd and I had to seek her out before reading the description. I think the idea of the posing in the window was very creative. The window however kind of dulls Florence and holds her back from being the star of this picture. Another strong picture from you! Congrats on a superb cycle of Incorp!

Dylan:

Model’s Appearance: 8/10
Model’s Pose: 9/10
Background: 9/10
Creativity: 15/15
Relation to CC: 5/5
Total: 46/50

So so so creative, Nigal! Poor Lainie, although she doesn’t seem to bothered by it. I really adore the idea you had here, possibly your most creative in this whole cycle. I really like the set up (totally looks like a storefront), although I do think the frosted type winds make it a bit hard to see. In fact, I find that the scared little girl caught my attention, and your models get a bit lost in the shuffle. That’s also why I deducted a point from background, just because of the windows blocking partial vision of the girls. Apart from that, I just really like this assignment so much, I just think that if those things were to be addressed. This would get a 50/50 from me, give or take. Excellente, Nigal! You’ve definitely got the knack, so I hope to see you continue modeling again!



Nigal with Florence! (+3)




Second Place: Dr. Lincoln with Darley (+2)
Third Place: Izzy with Becky (+1)

Past Picks:

Assignment 1- Dr. Lincoln with Darley
Assignment 2- Liv with Breanna
Assignment 3- Dr. Lincoln with Darley
Assignment 4- Nigal with Florence
Assignment 5- Mark with Kayla



Izzy with Becky! (+3)




Second Place: Nigal with Florence (+2)
Third Place: Dr. Lincoln with Darley (+1)

Past Picks:

Assignment 1- Nigal with Florence
Assignment 2- Liv with Breanna
Assignment 3- Nigal with Florence
Assignment 4- Dr. Lincoln wtih Darley
Assignment 5- Mark with Kayla



This week, Dylan chose...

Nigal with Florence! (+3)




Past Picks:

Assignment 1- Liv with Breanna
Assignment 2- Dr. Lincoln with Darley
Assignment 3- Izzy with Becky
Assignment 4- Dr. Lincoln with Darley
Assignment 5- Mark with Kayla



Congratulations to...


Our winner, Dr. Lincoln!



Our runner up, Nigal!



And our two finalists, Mark and Izzy!





Overall placings were as follows:

Dr. Lincoln 883
Nigal 868
Mark 856
Izzy 783

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And one more to be on the safe side! ;D

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Okay, you can post now! ^.^

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I'd do this just to see how 'creative' I can get with Lainie. Reserve me, please?

Is that Dawdee? The judge portraits looks awfully familiar.

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Darleymikey wrote:I'd do this just to see how 'creative' I can get with Lainie. Reserve me, please?

Is that Dawdee? The judge portraits looks awfully familiar.

Yay! <3
And yup, that is indeed Dawdee! ^.^

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I lurked last cycle and i'd love to join, but those 2 evil words won't fit in to my computer.

Pose Player...

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ArtistByNight wrote:I lurked last cycle and i'd love to join, but those 2 evil words won't fit in to my computer.

Pose Player...

Aww. D:
I wish I could help, but I'm no good with helping people install mods.

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drew10player wrote:
ArtistByNight wrote:I lurked last cycle and i'd love to join, but those 2 evil words won't fit in to my computer.

Pose Player...

Aww. D:
I wish I could help, but I'm no good with helping people install mods.


I've had all the help I could get, I followed every instruction and still nothing. Even my dad tried and he can't do it

*returns to moviemaker cheat land*

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ArtistByNight wrote:
drew10player wrote:
ArtistByNight wrote:I lurked last cycle and i'd love to join, but those 2 evil words won't fit in to my computer.

Pose Player...

Aww. D:
I wish I could help, but I'm no good with helping people install mods.


I've had all the help I could get, I followed every instruction and still nothing. Even my dad tried and he can't do it

*returns to moviemaker cheat land*


Which operating system? I'm using windows.
All I did was make a folder called 'mods'. I put it in my documents/ea/sims3 file. Inside the 'mods' folder, I put a folder called 'packages'.

unzip everything but saved sims to that file.

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Is there any chance we'll be seeing a third cycle of Staged Modeling Drew? If so, i'd be interested in joining

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I wanna join! This time I'm not dropping out!

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