This photo is very peaceful! I really like how you have lightened up their faces; it really shows good quality in expressions.
Sporkayyee "I always told you I would figure out your secret." Ashlee managed to get out, looking up at him. When she was around him, she got butterflies and always seemed to mess up her sentences. At her comment, he laughed lightly. It was the laugh that lit up Ashlee's world. "I love you." he whispered.
My entry was based off of the paranormal romance books(Hush,Hush specifically)! Hence why Ashlee's crush has wings.
That sunset is very well positioned! Awesome work there! I really like how you have positioned Nadiya to be the centre of attention. Although half her body is hidden, her face is towards the audience which makes her the focal point! Overall, the photo is very romantic and the scene is perfect!
elliec123 This is two people who love and care for each other and who don't need anything else but each other.
Your models face is very intense; she is showing true passion! I really like how she is the centre of attention also, ( I know how hard it can be to take a photo in between two people). So you have done a good job there!
SehRehSah "ANYTHING BUT THE FACE"...
Tessa never knew the mini-torture-chamber-like room in the basement of her mansion/mini castle would be of so much use....Especially towards threatening her deliciously, bronzed model of an EX-boyfriend. She wasn't actually going to torture him, just taunt him a bit. She wouldn't dare position herself in such acts which could potentially displace her perfectly made hair and make up.
Very creative and perfect quality. Very well done in those areas! I like how you have thought of something different. And your right, the grudge-type decor does look pretty cool. Poor guy though! Tessa just doesn't seem the type!!
loopyloo01 *Violas P.O.V*
It was Valentines Day. A day I loathed. Why? Because I never had a date. But this year was different. Too Different. Why? Because I killed my ex-husband's new girlfriend. Not that I was jealous. I couldn't care less. But what I cared about, was the fact that I put the frame on my ex. Did I want that? No. I wanted him to be WITH ME INSTEAD. But no. He had to get arrested. And put on Death Row. And killed by the Electric Chair. I guess I failed my mission to win my ex-husband back on Valentines Day.
elliec123 That day in the grave-yard, Kate had felt something was wrong, something was different. She had been there so many times before to visit her husbands tomb. Always in her wedding dress, the dress she wore when she lost him.
Kate had been mourning by her husbands grave when a transparent figure came up to her.
Kate woke up on the floor by a grave, her husbands grave. The ghost that had knocked her out stepped forward, and began to cry "Kate Fownhope will now join her husband so that they may walk this Earth as one"
The light then left and there was nothing but darkness.
Love the creativeness within this photo. As soon as I saw this photo, I knew it was a thriller theme. The way the ghosts are just standing beside her creeps me out a little.. But remember thats a good thing! Also congrats on being the first one to submit a photo. Your work was also runner up for Best Read as I really like the story behind it!
Chicken15 Living in a world where angels and vampires existed would scare any normal person, but hunter born Ashlyn chose to use her special abilities to track down rogue vampires and return them to their owners.
But this time, it's not a wayward vamp she has to track. It's an archangel gone bad. (Inspired by Guild hunter series)
Oh the blood, very thriller! The body gesture Ashlyn is showing holds a lot of suspense, hence the reason I gave you a perfect mark in that area. True thrillers will create tension!
loopyloo01 *Viola's Diary Entry dated August 19th 1999*
The BSAA have been dispatched into a forest-like place in Africa, to try and stop a man named 'Irving' selling some B.O.W (Bio-Organic Weapons) on the black market. But when myself and Chris (Her soon-to-be husband/ex-husband) arrived, we discovered that there were even greater problems here. We have found out that majority of the 'locals' have been infected with the C-Virus, which makes them gain inhuman qualities (Into parasites/zombies). While searching through whats left of this place, we encountered a forest near a lake with a gravestone on the edge. There was a 'odd looking' woman lying there, dead. Just as we began to investigate, we heard rustles from the trees and a familiar.. roaring sound. We got out our guns and aimed where the noise was coming from. We basically stood back-to-back and fired at these parasites as they ran to slaughter us, just like they did with the Delta team..
You should be some sort of writer as your writing skills are really good! You really described the photo well. Composition is perfect but I can't really see the scene as much due to the darkness. Spotlights maybe? But I do like the idea behind it. So good job!
Sporkayyee The trio woke up in complete shock. The last thing any of them could remember was partying in Bridgeport. To be to the point, they were all terrified to be waking up in some sort of maintenance shed. Well, maybe not a shed. They couldn't tell. After about twenty feet in front of them, the shadows took over and it was pitch black. To their dismay, there couldn't locate any doors or windows, although the likeliness of them being far away in the dark was pretty high. They peered into the darkness, as occasionally they heard what sounded like footsteps.
"So, you've finally woken up, I see." Came a sinister voice with a laugh, from somewhere in the darkness.
'It's over.' was the only thing Ashlee could think in that moment.
You have put a bit of effort into creating the scene, so well done! I do like the story behind it, it gives it that extra suspense, but unfortunately, this is a modeling competition. *Bummer* Otherwise I would of given you a 10 for description!! Again, your quality is near perfect. Awesome work!
SehRehSah It's close to Midnight and something evil's lurking in the dark!~
Eep! Turn around.. I love this photo!! The addition of adding a knife, really makes it terrifying. Also, I really like the camera angle. Taking the photo down below really makes the man holding the knife seem big!
Rayshizzie It was a warm night during Spring Break and although Nadiya and here best girls were no longer in college, they decided they needed a break as well. For more reasons than one. Of course one of those reasons was the fact that they missed eachother! Nadiya had just gotten engaged and they needed some girl time...away from the guys. So they decided to go on a weekend camping trip up in the mountains. Back in town everyone was on edge. There was a serial killer on the loose who called himself "The Cowboy Killer". The only living witness verified the reason for this was the fact that he wore a black and white cow print cowboy hat. Getting away from all the tension was another reason the girls sought out a weekend of fun and relaxation. Surely they would be perfectly safe up in the mountains..."The Cowboy Killer" was known to attack the streets at night. There was no reason for him to be up there....So when Nadiya climbed out of the tent and saw a dark, creepy looking man with a cowboy hat reaching for her dear friend, she had to be dreaming, right? This just couldn't be happening...
I must say, this made me laugh a little when I first saw the photo, but after reading the description, you convinced me that this Cowboy killer, is serious business. I'm a little scared of him to be honest! If, I could I would give you 20/10 for creativity, as I think it is original, and well thought!
elliec123 The two witches, once friends, met in the middle of the night to discuss the state of their land. In which a magical wizard named oz had taken over, letting no magical being use magic without a pixie with them at all times. These two witches had thought it was a great idea at first but how wrong they were.
Kate and Lillianna knew the only way they could stop this madness was with one thing. The most magical thing on this planet...A human child. They joined their magic, the good and bad, to create Molly. They used an old worn out bunny Kate had found. The savour was born.
I love the story behind this picture - its something very original. The use of creating half colour, half black and white is a nice effect. I also like the transformation - the outfits that you have chosen especially. You photo was runner-up for best read. It was such a tough decision!
Chicken15 The Day Ashlyn got her wings, now all she has to do is make sure she keeps them!
I really like your models pose - it makes the photo appear very graceful. The composition is spot on and is very clear what the main focus is. The dots are also a nice touch.
Sporkayyee Ashlee was an elf. A forest elf, to be exact. She resided with her elf community in the Forest of Kambi, where she and her companions worked together to keep their lives comfortable. Ashlee was particularly skilled in water magic, and had no issues chasing out intruders in her village.
I love the description! Awesome photograph. That sparkle of light is really well done.
Rayshizzie As Nadiya was walking through the forest one night, she was shocked when she stumbled upon an injured and near starved to death UNICORN. That's right. She actually found a unicorn. A real unicorn. After the shock and disbeleif wore off, she immediately came to the aide of the beautiful creature. He grandmother lives on a farm where she practically grew up so she knew right away how to treat the wounded animal. About a few weeks later after caring for the unicorn at her grandmother's farm, the unicorn, who grew very fond of Nadiya, let her mount and took her for the ride of her life. She was teleported to a whole other world and was rewarded for her kindness and good spirit as a goddess. Her. Immortal. The Goddess of nature.
The next thing she knew, Nadiya woke up in her bed, in her room, on her planet. Back to Earth. Had she been watching too much "Spartacus" lately?
I love this photo! Theres something about it that makes me drawn to it. I like how you have not given a description as for my opinion didn't need. It leaves the viewer open minded about what could be happening. The mist is a very nice touch and the poses are very well done.
loopyloo01 As far as Viola's life goes, no husband or anyone to make their life hell, she had landed herself with an acting job, portraying Ileynia, a fairy who lost her memory and finding out some untold secrets. Viola was quite happy playing her, as Ileynia was alike herself. Her favourite part was the chance to be on TV, aswell as shooting the programme near the Aurora Borealis (Northern Lights)