Okay this is my first thread and definitely my first story. Nothing Fancy.No fancy poses. No fancy CC or mods. Just a story I created.Liliana is already on the exchange if you want her the other will be up soon as well. And sometime next week the ORIGINAL household will be on the exchange as well. I hope you all enjoy it as much I am enjoying making it.

This is a story of 2 couples living together. The two boys however are very flirty and the girls are hopelessly in love. It's a story full of Love, Drama, and Heartbreak. for a prologue you can look at some of more recent shared memories because I don't have any pictures of the actual prologue...

I now present to you, All Roses Have Thorns:
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13

I'm open to suggestion for paths I should take with these couples. I would also love to hear everyone's opinions on it!

It's almost been a day since I've posted so a bump so people can see and read my story!

Hey, I just read your story.

Not too bad for a first shot. I think you should definitely continue with this, because the idea has some potential, it just needs some spicing up. Every story has something that makes it special, and you just need to find that special something for your story. All stories start out ordinary, but the longer you stick with it, the easier it will be to figure out what's great about it. I like how you have two couples in the same household, instead of just following a single family - there's some big opportunities for drama with this household! Maybe Andrew believes his wife is pregnant with his baby, when in reality she accidentally got pregnant with the other guy? That could be interesting. Just a suggestion, I mean it's your story so you can do whatever you want with it.

Anyways, keep going with this. When you get more chapters up, I'm sure you'll collect more readers. I'm going to bookmark this and see where it goes... Good luck!

Siminoid wrote:Hey, I just read your story.

Not too bad for a first shot. I think you should definitely continue with this, because the idea has some potential, it just needs some spicing up. Every story has something that makes it special, and you just need to find that special something for your story. All stories start out ordinary, but the longer you stick with it, the easier it will be to figure out what's great about it. I like how you have two couples in the same household, instead of just following a single family - there's some big opportunities for drama with this household! Maybe Andrew believes his wife is pregnant with his baby, when in reality she accidentally got pregnant with the other guy? That could be interesting. Just a suggestion, I mean it's your story so you can do whatever you want with it.

Anyways, keep going with this. When you get more chapters up, I'm sure you'll collect more readers. I'm going to bookmark this and see where it goes... Good luck!

Thank you! I'll definitely keep that in mind. and I am definitely going to continue I love the ideas I put on my notepad for it and it's just different! Thank you for bookmarking it. I plan to have at least 3 parts per week because I always play on the weekend. Most likely there will be more.

But once again, thank you.

A bump for chapter 4!

I hope this thread doesn't die! I hope I don't be the only one posting on it!

But a bump for chapter 5

Hey, I'm still reading and I have to say it's getting better! I'm excited to see how the kids turn out, and I also want to find out if the families will end up splitting off or if they'll stay in the same household. Keep it up!

Siminoid wrote:Hey, I'm still reading and I have to say it's getting better! I'm excited to see how the kids turn out, and I also want to find out if the families will end up splitting off or if they'll stay in the same household. Keep it up!

Thank you! This is actually the second timeI put 2 couples together. But the first time they didn't have children first....they had like 200,000 sim made simoleons and the other houses didnt have enough bedrooms so I split them up and raised twins and now 1 twin moved ou so then they ,oved out. But wasnt as much drama so I have no clue what I'm planning... for the 2 families. We'll see!

bump for almost 10 chapters and 50 VIEWS FOR THE FIRST CHAPTER!AND ALMOST 200 TOTAL VIEWS! Recommend! Show it to others! Read it! Yay!

Yay, I just got caught up, and it's getting better! More drama now. Keep writing!

Well finals and school are both over so I think I will finally do the next chapter today!

Hiya!

Just started reading your story, I like it so far. It's getting better and better the further you get in the story. Keep it up!

Thank you!

Welp....Chapter 13 is a work in progress...I have the screen shots...just too lazy at the moment.

I finally put up chapter 13! It's a bit of a reboot for my brain but I find it entertaining....I'll work on chapter 14 tomorrow and It'll be up as a 4th of July gift!