Relevance to the theme 5/5
I like the whole idea of a vintage celebration and actually found it very creative. The background had lots of great detail that added to added to the whole vintage time period. However, I feel that there is a bit too much going on. There are 2 couples dancing and another lady dancing and there isn't enough to focus on. Maybe the couple in the front should have been a little more in focus or the sims in the background could've been eliminated. However, overall, this is a wonderfully done picture.
Here is my new edit.
I'm pretty happy with it. The background could have been better, but I didn't really know what kind of background I wanted.
What I did:
-attempted skin smoothing.
-fixed the hair (the weird white lines aren't from me-I think it was supposed to be shine on the hair)
-cut out the sim and put it on background (I think it looks better than last time, but I think with a little more practice, I will be a better.)
The tutorial you gave me really helped, so thanks for that too.
Joined: 06/02/09 12:26 PM
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Ok, mudfest if you want to check the post with the assignment I left a few pointers there. I'll probably use the post below it for Assignment 2 which focuses on how to set up your comp, intro, assignment, scores. I'll post when it is ready.
And as with assignment 1 I will be judging and commenting on the photo again.
You did a really good job judging
Mea - That does look better and I am glad the tutorial helped. I'll get your grades and next assignment up for you shortly.