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JaydeeXP


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Next Chapter please :3

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Can't wait till chapter 8 is out!

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It will be out today, there was just major storms yesterday and didn't want to chance the computer.

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Chapter 8:

I was thinking, could I really trust anyone anymore? What could I really do? Kimiko was an enemy? And Liam lied and made a plan with Kimiko.


I sat on a swing that was nearby, I needed to think, what if others were in on it?


I really didn’t know what I was planning to do. Liam and Kimiko, who else Noah? I couldn’t see Liza or Brigdette being in the plan they told me how much they didn’t like Kimiko but Liza is Liam’s cousin. Lyic? Kimiko and him are going out right? This was so confusing!


My thoughts cleared for now as a cute little girl started talking with me. She told me her name was Rose, I had never met this girl before but her hair reminded me of Lyic.


She wanted to play tag and I had wished for a little sister but that would never happen unless my mother remarried.


“You should come over to my house.” She told me as we stopped playing.
“Are your parents home?” I asked I didn’t want to intrude.
“Yep, they are always home.” She said then started pulling me in a direction.


We were in front of a big white house and she told me this was her house. Her parents must be rich I thought, from what I could see from the house there was three or maybe four stories to it.


Seeing her parents was a little embarrassing, they were making-out in front of the door. Then I noticed something kind of odd.


Her father was Lyic’s dad. Did he remarry?


She asked him if I could sleep over and of course I hadn’t even agreed to it but he told his princess yes. Now I stuck here, if I did try to leave I know she would cry so there wasn’t anything I could do.


Her mother almost looked sick, like she hasn’t slept in days. Could she be Lyic’s mother? Her eyes are so much like Lyic’s, his family line used to have Vampire linage but they mated with many humans so they began to fade out now there are only a few vampire’s in his family. That’s where the family gets their bright red eyes or almost like a pinkish colour.


Then in strolled Lyic, his eyes seemed a bit shocked?
“Kaylee what are you doing here?” He asked then looked straight to his sister.
“She’s my new friend.” Rose said with a big toothy smile.
“You know this girl, Lyic?” His father asked with a smile as well.
“Yes, she’s one of my friends from school.” He said and that jabbed in my side, friend.


Rose took me to her room and we started to play.




Lyic came in and told his sister that he needed to steal me for a bit. She didn’t seem to mind, they look so much a like.


He wanted to talk but I couldn’t look at him, I kept thinking of when he kissed me.
“Kaylee.” He said.
“What?” I asked, as I got nervous.
“I like you.” He repeated and I looked at him, he seemed nervous.
“I like you too.” I said a bit quietly but then said.
“Your going out with Kimiko.”


We got up and he started to laugh.
“I wouldn’t go out with Kimiko, the only reason why I hung out with her is because of you.” He told me.
I was a little bit shocked, Lyic only hung out with her because of me. Did Kimiko only hang out with my to be around Lyic?


It was getting dark and I had called my mom telling her I was staying here then changed into my pajamas.


Lyic’s mother said I could sleep in the spare room and that Rose had already fallen asleep.


I went into the room and laid on the bed but I couldn’t sleep. I wanted to talk with Lyic, but was he still up?


I snuck into his room but he was sleeping? He was in such a weird position.
“Lyic?” I whispered.
“What?” He whispered back but didn’t open his eyes.
“I wanted to talk.” I whispered again.


"I want to be your girlfriend.” I told him.
“I want you to be my girlfriend.”
Then he kissed me. I felt better this time like the weight had been lifted.


The feeling was so right nothing could ruin this moment.


We talked to each other until we fell asleep.

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I loved the new chapter! Cant wait for the next one <3 *hint hint*

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MORE!!! I need more! I need something to entertain me. This is such like my life. THANK YOU!

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Valerie_RedCloak wrote:I loved the new chapter! Cant wait for the next one <3 *hint hint*


Thanks. ^^

Angryflower wrote:MORE!!! I need more! I need something to entertain me. This is such like my life. THANK YOU!


Thanks and the next chapter should be out tomorrow. I haven't really thought of what's going to happen yet. And I just wanted everyone to see the real Laine, her name is actually Shadow but here is what Laine was based off of.


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Nawwwwwwww! xx

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Chapter 9:

It was the weekend again, it’s been two days since Lyic and I have been going out. I had died my hair back to black; I loved and missed my black hair.


“Laine I have my first date with Lyic today.” I told her excited; summer holiday was just around the corner too.


I stood there waiting for Lyic, I didn’t know where we were going but I really didn’t care as long as Lyic is there.


Lyic surprised me when he showed up he just kissed me. I liked it; don’t get my wrong it was just in public it made me a bit nervous.


He wouldn’t tell me where we were going; he told me it was a surprise but I wanted to know so badly. He wouldn’t even give me a hint.


He brought me to a driving range and it really wasn’t what I was expecting.


He taught me how to hold the club and how to hit the ball. Then I started having a good time trying to whack the balls.


Even though I kept missing.




Then after we had a romantic dinner outside as the sun started to set. It was so beautiful.


He told me he had one last place to take me.


I was speechless it was just so wonderful. Then he asked if I wanted to go for a swim but I hadn’t brought a bathing suit.
“No worry’s just go in your underwear.” Then he started to strip and I started to blush.


The water was cold at first but warmed up, we didn’t stay in the water too long.


We had to dry off so we sat down on some chairs and started to talk.
“I had fun today.” I told him smiling.
“I’m glad.” He said smiling back.


Then I had to go home, he held my hands and told me that he will be asking me out again very soon.


And gave me a kiss goodnight.


After he went home.


I took a shower, getting the sand and the smell of the water from me.


I picked up Laine and hugged her, I was just so happy I couldn’t hold it in.
“I’m going out with Lyic. Isn’t that great Laine?” I said in a very happy tone.


I went to get a glass of water when I heard my mother in the other room. I was going to say hi but saw she was on the phone.
“No you can’t have Noah back, your late ex-husband gave me and my late husband sole custody of him because you took off. So what! He is Kaylee’s fiancée, and there’s nothing you can do about it. It’s not like I knew that he made a pact with him when he was younger. If you were a good mother you shouldn’t have left him in the first place. . .” After that I just walked away I couldn’t believe it.


I’m Noah’s fiancée?

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OH MY GOD!!! Thats intense! NEXT CHAPTER!

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Thoughts on what should happen in the next chapters?

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Bubble16


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OMG I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!

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Missty0Citty


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The next chapter will be up later today, I am half way through it. Just be patient. ^^

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Yay

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Chapter 10:

I didn’t get a wink of sleep last night; I couldn’t stop thinking of what happen last night. How was it even possible, Noah’s my brother right? I know we aren’t really related since he’s my adopted brother but still he’s always been my brother.


But putting that all a side for now I was getting ready for a day out with my girls. I couldn’t quite remember what we were going to be doing but I didn’t really mind.


I started to prepare my breakfast; I wanted something healthy this morning.


A salad for breakfast isn’t what you would usually have but it’s what I wanted.


My mother was sitting right across from me; I wanted to ask her what was going on. Who Noah’s mother was, If Noah was really my Fiancée, Why his mother left him, Why his parents divorced and how his father died. But I couldn’t, she didn’t even notice I was there she was deep in thought.


I finally get with the guy of my dreams then things get complicated? I wish that everything could just be normal.


That’s when I could feel myself being sucked into the mirror?


When I became aware of where I was, I didn’t know what to think. I wasn’t in my house, in some strange room I almost panicked.


My appearance shocked me; my hair was gone and blue? I kind of look like a punk rocker and in the reflection of the mirror I saw someone.


Lyic? He looked different too; her style was like a punk rocker as well.
“Sis it’s about time you got up, mom was about to freak.” He said and I was confused.
“Lyic is this a joke?” I asked, this most be a prank.
“No mom seriously was going to freak out. Oh ya your boy toy is here, you are going on a date or something.” He told me then walked away.
Now it was starting to freak me out.


Noah was the one waiting for me and I didn’t know what to do.
“This is a joke right? Where are the cameras? I’m on T.V. right?” I asked I didn’t get it how could I be going out with Noah?
Lyic then hit me on the back.
“There is no need to be shy.” Lyic said.


I looked over to my mother and she looked so young, she didn’t look like my mother. It was almost scary and she wouldn’t look at me, I had to run that’s the only thing I could do until they stopped this joke.




What was going on? I really didn’t know.


Someone who looked oddly familiar. Kimiko?


“Kaylee you wouldn’t believe it, Liam finally said he would go out with me.” She said with a giant smile.
What the heck? Kimiko looked almost normal, this was really starting to freak me out.


I had walked away from Kimiko and started walking back to my home? Then I saw Brigdette and Liza.



When I got closer to them and they look like they went through Kimiko’s closet.
“Hey guys.” I said kind of happy to see them.
“Ew loser get away from me.” Brigdette said and pushed past me.



What is going on? I’m going to go crazy.


“Knock, Knock.” Pretending to knock then Lyic walked into the room.


“Hey why did ya just run? I mean I know he isn’t as good looking as me but seriously he’s your boyfriend.” He said and I felt like crying.
“I’m not the Kaylee you know.” I told him, I didn’t think he would believe me but his face changed.
“You’re doing that magic stuff again?” He sighed then he did something I wasn’t expecting.


He kissed me, he was my brother right? Why would he do that?

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